Thursday, 15 September 2016

Portfolio art post.

Description: This term we have been doing art. Our art is bassed on something called the drunkards path. Suzzane showed us this thpe of art and we decided we wanted to do it as well. First we made some paint coulerd paper and then cut it out into bits to make our drunkards path. her is a photo of mine. We also had to make a pencil one to add to our originals and the we put them together into a piece of art.


feedback: i like how you added different colours that work well together and then put them in different places to make it look better.

Feedforward:I think next time you could have mixed up the colours more.

Evaluation: It was really hard to make the bits fit but I think I did really well making them fit.




Sunday, 11 September 2016

E T Reo

Description: Every Monday we have something called ET Reo. ET Reo is basically TE Reo. We have a Maori proverb or saying and we make an action for that saying. For our one, we did what is the most important thing in the world the people the people the people. Our action was making people to put on the wall with our proverb.


Feedback: Mabey you could add more detail to your person.
Feedforward: I like how you made your person he looks really good. William B

Evaluation: I think I did really well making my person look good and the action was difficult to pass on.





Thursday, 1 September 2016

writing with elly. 2016

Description: Every Tuesday Thursday Friday we have writing. For writing we are working on complex, compound and simple sentences. Here is my slide. It has all my work and what I have been doing so far.


Evaluation: I think I did really well with my sentences because they are understandable with the story and are easy to understand.

Feedforward: I think next time you could have managed your time better. Kyan
Feedback: I think you did really well with your sentence knowledge and with your slide. Kyan